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Deeper and deeper...
I'm falling deeper
through an everlasting hole.

Deeper and deeper,
I find myself digging away,
trying to bury a broken capsule.
Locked inside is the pain I feel,
locked inside are the memories
that cease to fade.

My sanity begins to slip away,
as I try to find another way.
But I keep getting deeper and deeper
into this everlasting hole,
into the everlasting darkness.

Trying to bury the capsule
but I keep falling farther.
Why won't this pain go away
why won't these memories fade.

Everything is still here,
as I try to bury it all away.
They follow me, through my sanity.
And I see myself going insane as
I fall deeper and deeper.

Every time I bury this capsule,
I see myself falling deeper and deeper
into an everlasting hole.
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The more you try to keep something painful inside or some type of memory inside, the more you will fall into it, the more that pain and the memories are going to devour you... Ehhh I think I overused deeper and deeper >.< oh well^-^
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~Lilithmae1231 Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it!
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*GUDRUN355 Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, it's something that everyone can identify with - the memories which will not fade. Good poetry.
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~c1oud9 Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know the feeling
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~sumersela Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice poem, know the feeling all to well
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